Re-submitting coursework
So after my exam and getting all my grades back, it turns out i was 4/5 marks of the next grade up.
So I decided to re-submit my coursework after evaluating it and changed a few things, hopefully for the better.
This involved editing the final video slightly and re-doing my final evaluation.
Re-editing the video included changing the title sequences, which we felt needed a bit more work. After looking at some other thriller openings, the main influence being those for the filom Seven, I chose on a simple white, slightly creepy text, and then made them jump around the page whilst a static noise played over the top. This was to parrallel the radio jumping and cutting out during the thriller.
I also editing the bit when you see the doll, giving a motion blur and cutting it shorter in order to give more of an effect.
At the end, i also cut down the amount of time we see the antagonist in the mirror, as i thought it was too long and lost some of the dramatic affect. However, it was now too short, so i decided to go with a freeze frame of it in order to get the perfect length for the audience to see him, but as it was a freeze frame, the obviously wouldn’t then see the reaction of the protagnoist or what happens next, leaving them on a cliffhanger.
